1.The runners coming this far,they decided to push through the very strenuous final mile of the marathon. Having come this far,the runners

　　点评：记住这个句式，Having done sth,XX…不是说它有知识上的意义(大家肯定早就知道了)，只是说它正确的频率相当高。同时原句没有转折语气就不要用转折词。

　　2. Some of the classes taught in American classrooms are interpretations of lessons used worldwide,particularly those in European history. classroom,particularly in European history,are interpreations of lessons used worldwide.

　　点评：注意指代对象

　　3.Joann,the newest student at Leon Blum high school,has been portrayed as the brightest student and also the most unruly of them. the brightest and yet the most unruly of students.

　　点评：记住吧。。。the brightest and yet the most unruly of students，后面还有一道关于老虎的题也差不多。

　　4.Ann’s parents explained that she was promoted to hear journalist for the reason that her articcles were mindful always for both side of the issue. because her articles were always mindful of both sides of the issues

　　点评：表原因最好还是用简洁的表达方法，如“because”，“since”等单个词而不是如“for the reason that”等结构。简洁

　　5.(常考题：转折)Many wealthy taxpayers pay less than ten percent of their annual incomes to the government,some middle-income taxpayers pay a much larger percentage annually. Although many wealthy taxpayers pay

　　点评：转折句，富人少给，较穷人多给，故用“虽然。。。但是。。。”SAT题中很多都谈到这种“不公平”现象。改的时候一般在前就用Although，在后就用yet。(和那个非洲人和美国人收入题类似)

　　6. OW was almost as brilliant a novelist as he was at writing plays. almost as brilliant a novelist as he was a playwright

　　点评：并列结构，故前后都因该用职业(名词)。所以说要考虑对比/类比双方的一致性。

　　7.Examining the catalogue,the phrase “while supplies last” and “get it while it’s hot” are designed to encourage consumers to order the product immeidately. one sees that the phrase

　　点评：注意动作的执行者。Examing后面必须对应一个能去Exam的主语。

　　8.In professional soccer,players kick the ball sharply and accurately;however in other sports their technique is not quite so effective. Right!

　　点评：呵呵，每一行都有每一行的门道。转折关系用转折词。

　　9.The changing color of autumn leaves has a unique fascination for those people which have an understanding of life-cycles in them.. who see the life cycles in them.

　　点评： “see”也有“理解”的意思,直接用动词更简洁。同时，修饰“people”用who而不用which。