第一,使用具体名字。模糊的写法可能是:He sold his camper. 而具体词汇的使用则是:Luke sold his Winnebago.
第二,使用逼真活泼的动词。模糊的写法:The flag moved in the breeze. 具体化变成:The flag fluttered in the breeze.
第三,名词前使用修饰词汇。模糊写法:A man strained to lift the crate. 具体化变成:A heavyset, perspiring man strained to lift the heavy wooden crate.
注意这里heavyset, perspiring, heavy wooden这些字的使用。
第四,使用与感官有关的词汇——视觉,听觉,视觉,味觉,触觉等。
模糊写法:That woman jogs five miles a day 视觉具体化:That fragile-looking, gray-haired woman jogs five miles a day.
模糊写法: A noise told the crowd that there were two minutes left to play. 听觉具体化: A piercing whistle told the cheering crowd that there were two minutes left to play.
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